Once again it’s fiction Friday and here I am with the story I came up with for this month’s picture prompt. How about you? Did you find yourself inspired by the picture? Just as a reminder, here it is:
My story turned out a little longer than I expected, and I have to admit it’s a little rough. But ready or not, here it is:
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The Bleakness
Clouds boiled in the sky, a sickly combination of grey and green and brown. That’s when she knew her spell had worked. Until that moment, she hadn’t been sure it would. It was a dark magic, and old magic passed down through generations but no one had ever used it before. No one had been consumed with the right amount of rage and sorrow....
The day had begun much as all the days did. While she hoed the small vegetable patch beside the house, she kept an eye on Lanni, her youngest, as she played contentedly with her doll in the shade of the apple tree. The branches of the tree were just starting to dip under the weight of the apples they held - it promised to be a good crop this year.
In the distance she could see Joseph working diligently in the fields, Henry and Robard close by. The sky was clear and blue, giving no hint of what was to come. She’d paused for a moment, leaning on her hoe, and watched a hawk wheeling above, then suddenly diving. He was so fast his prey had not even a chance to cry out.
And that was when the horn sounded.
She’d frozen in place. Out in the field Joseph’s head snapped up, and when the horn sounded a second time he sent the boys ahead of him as they raced towards the house. Shaking off her paralysis, she dropped the hoe and snatched Lanni up, ignoring the plaintive cries for the dropped doll as she rushed into the house.
“There’s no time to take anything,” Joseph shouted, catching up to her at the door.
“But...”
He sent the boys on ahead then took Lanni from her. Frightened, Lanni began to cry harder.
“Things can be replaced, you can’t,” Joseph said grimly. “We’ve no time to waste.”
He was right and she followed him back out of the house without a second glance. There was not enough time to follow the road and they cut across the fields, stumbling on the uneven ground. As they caught up to the boys Robard fell, crying out in pain. They paused long enough for Joseph to pass Lanni over to her and then he scooped Robard up into his arms.
The gate was just closing as they reached the village wall.
“Wait!” Joseph shouted.
But the gate shut fast and they heard the bar drop into place.
“Please,” she called out, as Joseph set Robard down so he could start pounding on the gate. “You can’t just leave us out here!”
“It’s the likes of you what brung the raiders in the first place,” an angry voice called from behind the gate. “With any luck they’ll take you and leave us be.”
“At least take the children!” she begged, only to be met with silence.
They turned to run but it was too late. The small party of raiders, advance scouts for a much larger group, had them surrounded. Though they had no come specifically for her, once they saw the mark on her forehead she knew they were lost.
The raiders took them back to the homestead and made her watch as one by one they tortured and killed her family. She remained stoic, resigned, refusing even to shed a tear. Finally they beat her and raped her and left her for dead.
There no sympathy from the villagers who ventured out to see the raiders handiwork the next morning, but then she expected none. Dry-eyed, she stood and faced them.
“You have only yourself to blame, witch. This is what comes of consorting with the devil.”
“I am no witch,” she said proudly. “As you well know.”
“You bear the mark,” the headman’s wife hissed.
“It’s just a mark, it means nothing.”
“You need to leave,” the headman told her. “We don’t want your kind here.”
“And where am I to go? This is my home.”
“No longer. We want you gone before your trouble becomes ours.”
“You have no idea what trouble is,” she said softly. “But you will.”
They left without even offering to help bury her dead, not that she would have accepted. Her heart was stone, she was stone. Alone she buried her family, four graves lined up side by side. With each shovelful of rocky soil her anger grew, soon outweighing her sorrow. They would have only had to open the gate and her family would still be alive. But they were too superstitious, too petty - and they would pay.
She was not a witch, but she came from a long line of witches. They had but one spell left to them, passed down from generation to generation. Her mother had not used it, nor her grandmother, nor even her grandmother’s mother. But she did.
It was a summoning spell, it called the creature known as The Bleakness. It stood before her and she pointed at the village behind its wall, no words were necessary. At her direction it turned and drifted that way, the crops in the field it passed over shriveling in its wake.
She watched even though she could no longer see it, knowing that where The Bleakness passed, barrenness followed - fields, animals, women - no life would grow here for a hundred seasons. There would be no crops, no increasing herds, no children.
At last she turned away and started back towards the house to pack up what few belongings she was taking with her. As she passed the apple tree, fruit rotting on its limbs, she spied Lanni’s doll laying where she’d dropped it. She reached down and picked it up and a shiver went through her.
Numbly she continued on into the house. There was nothing she wanted to take from this place. There was nowhere for her to go where she’d be welcome. She sank down onto the hearth with the doll in her arms and wept.
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Tuesday, March 17, 2015
Happy Saint Patrick's Day!
I posted this story a few years ago on a different blog, but I thought it would be fun to post it again to help celebrate St. Paddy's Day. Hope you enjoy!
What the Leprechaun Said
Fiona sat in her favourite spot under the whitethorn tree, her back resting against its gnarled trunk. The tree grew from the center of what her Gran considered the wild garden, the part of the garden reserved for the wee folk.
It was going to break her heart to have to say goodbye to the place. The letter from the bank had been a total shock; this property had been in the family for generations. She was just glad Gran wasn't around to see it come to this.
"Fee? You out here?"
"Over here," she called back, hastily wiping away her tears.
She was joined by her friends Tammy and Gillian, who sat down, one on either side of her. They'd been friends forever. Even after they grew up and went their separate ways in college - Gillian into finance, Tammy into teaching, and Fiona into art - they'd stayed close.
"I don't know why you love this old tree so much," Tammy said. "It's so scraggly looking."
"Gran's Gran planted this tree the day she arrived from the old country. Gran told me she used to meet the wee man under this tree."
"Your Gran met him, or your Gran's Gran?"
"Both of them," Fiona said with a ghost of a smile. "The 'sight' skips every other generation. Apparently you need the 'sight' to see them."
Tammy and Gillian looked at each other over her head.
Nobody spoke for a few moments until Fiona couldn't stand it any longer. "Well?"
"I'm sorry, hon," Gillian said, voice laced with regret. "It looks like your Uncle Sean started siphoning off funds from the trust account about ten years before he died. Between the falling interest rates and the rising taxes, the trust fund just couldn't keep up."
"So that's it," Fiona said duly. "I'm broke."
"Maybe Gillian and I--"
"No. Absolutely not." Fiona was adamant. "I'm not taking money from my friends to pay the back taxes. There's got to be another way."
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That night, Fiona dreamed of her Gran in the garden. "Remember the wee man," she said, and then walked right into the whitethorn tree. Fiona woke with a start.
From her bedroom window she could see the whitethorn tree bathed in moonlight. Tammy was right, it did look a little scraggly. She was really going to miss that tree, and the garden. She remembered that Gran used to keep Guinness around to water the tree with once a month. And didn't she leave oat cakes or soda bread or something like that as well? For the wee man who lived there, she'd said.
Before Fiona could stop to think about it, she'd pulled on her jeans and a sweat shirt and was checking the cupboard under the stairs where Gran used to keep her liquor. There was no Guinness, but she found a bottle of Jameson's that was three-quarters full. Shrugging, she carried it into the kitchen and snagged a box of oatmeal cookies on her way out the back door.
Midnight found her sitting under the whitethorn tree, the moonlight streaming down on her.
"Here's to you, Gran," she said, waving the bottle in the air before taking a sip. She choked and coughed as the liquor burned its way down. "And here's to your wee man - I hope whoever ends up living here next will treat him right."
"Now ye would'na be thinking of pouring that good whiskey on the ground now, would ye?"
Fiona yelped, and almost dropped the bottle as a tiny man dressed in green appeared beside her. "You--where--what--"
"'Tis a good thing yer an artist instead of a writer. Now just pour a wee drop in here." He held out a tiny cup.
"You . . . you're a leprechaun!"
"Aye, it's observant she is." He tipped back the cup and then held it out again. "Did your Gran ne'er tell ye the story of how I came over on the boat with her Gran? 'Twas more than eighty years ago an' I been guarding her treasure ever since."
"What? Wait. What treasure?"
"Why the treasure the first Fiona O'Shea brought with her from the Green Isle," he said, polishing off another cupful of whiskey. "She saved me life, you know, from that flea bitten ship's cat. And in return I promised to guard her gold until she had need of it."
"Tell me more about my great-great-Grandmother and her gold." Fiona settled back against the tree. "And would you like a cookie to go with your whiskey?"
"Thank ye kindly," the leprechaun said. "But would ye happen to have any pipe tobacco on ye?"
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"I can't believe your great-Grandmother buried a fortune in gold in the garden," Gillian said as they sat on the patio enjoying a glass of wine. "And your Gran knew about it and never said a word?"
"It was my great-great-Grandmother, and Gran never said anything because as far as she knew there was no need, she had plenty of money already."
"Until your Uncle Sean got his hands on it," Tammy said darkly. "But how did you know exactly where to dig?"
Fiona smiled as she looked over to the base of the whitethorn tree where she'd left a pint of Guinness an ounce of the finest pipe tobacco she could find. "I just followed what the leprechaun said."
What the Leprechaun Said
Fiona sat in her favourite spot under the whitethorn tree, her back resting against its gnarled trunk. The tree grew from the center of what her Gran considered the wild garden, the part of the garden reserved for the wee folk.
It was going to break her heart to have to say goodbye to the place. The letter from the bank had been a total shock; this property had been in the family for generations. She was just glad Gran wasn't around to see it come to this.
"Fee? You out here?"
"Over here," she called back, hastily wiping away her tears.
She was joined by her friends Tammy and Gillian, who sat down, one on either side of her. They'd been friends forever. Even after they grew up and went their separate ways in college - Gillian into finance, Tammy into teaching, and Fiona into art - they'd stayed close.
"I don't know why you love this old tree so much," Tammy said. "It's so scraggly looking."
"Gran's Gran planted this tree the day she arrived from the old country. Gran told me she used to meet the wee man under this tree."
"Your Gran met him, or your Gran's Gran?"
"Both of them," Fiona said with a ghost of a smile. "The 'sight' skips every other generation. Apparently you need the 'sight' to see them."
Tammy and Gillian looked at each other over her head.
Nobody spoke for a few moments until Fiona couldn't stand it any longer. "Well?"
"I'm sorry, hon," Gillian said, voice laced with regret. "It looks like your Uncle Sean started siphoning off funds from the trust account about ten years before he died. Between the falling interest rates and the rising taxes, the trust fund just couldn't keep up."
"So that's it," Fiona said duly. "I'm broke."
"Maybe Gillian and I--"
"No. Absolutely not." Fiona was adamant. "I'm not taking money from my friends to pay the back taxes. There's got to be another way."
* ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ *
That night, Fiona dreamed of her Gran in the garden. "Remember the wee man," she said, and then walked right into the whitethorn tree. Fiona woke with a start.
From her bedroom window she could see the whitethorn tree bathed in moonlight. Tammy was right, it did look a little scraggly. She was really going to miss that tree, and the garden. She remembered that Gran used to keep Guinness around to water the tree with once a month. And didn't she leave oat cakes or soda bread or something like that as well? For the wee man who lived there, she'd said.
Before Fiona could stop to think about it, she'd pulled on her jeans and a sweat shirt and was checking the cupboard under the stairs where Gran used to keep her liquor. There was no Guinness, but she found a bottle of Jameson's that was three-quarters full. Shrugging, she carried it into the kitchen and snagged a box of oatmeal cookies on her way out the back door.
Midnight found her sitting under the whitethorn tree, the moonlight streaming down on her.
"Here's to you, Gran," she said, waving the bottle in the air before taking a sip. She choked and coughed as the liquor burned its way down. "And here's to your wee man - I hope whoever ends up living here next will treat him right."
"Now ye would'na be thinking of pouring that good whiskey on the ground now, would ye?"
Fiona yelped, and almost dropped the bottle as a tiny man dressed in green appeared beside her. "You--where--what--"
"'Tis a good thing yer an artist instead of a writer. Now just pour a wee drop in here." He held out a tiny cup.
"You . . . you're a leprechaun!"
"Aye, it's observant she is." He tipped back the cup and then held it out again. "Did your Gran ne'er tell ye the story of how I came over on the boat with her Gran? 'Twas more than eighty years ago an' I been guarding her treasure ever since."
"What? Wait. What treasure?"
"Why the treasure the first Fiona O'Shea brought with her from the Green Isle," he said, polishing off another cupful of whiskey. "She saved me life, you know, from that flea bitten ship's cat. And in return I promised to guard her gold until she had need of it."
"Tell me more about my great-great-Grandmother and her gold." Fiona settled back against the tree. "And would you like a cookie to go with your whiskey?"
"Thank ye kindly," the leprechaun said. "But would ye happen to have any pipe tobacco on ye?"
* ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ *
"I can't believe your great-Grandmother buried a fortune in gold in the garden," Gillian said as they sat on the patio enjoying a glass of wine. "And your Gran knew about it and never said a word?"
"It was my great-great-Grandmother, and Gran never said anything because as far as she knew there was no need, she had plenty of money already."
"Until your Uncle Sean got his hands on it," Tammy said darkly. "But how did you know exactly where to dig?"
Fiona smiled as she looked over to the base of the whitethorn tree where she'd left a pint of Guinness an ounce of the finest pipe tobacco she could find. "I just followed what the leprechaun said."
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