Ghazal

The Ghazal (pronounced "ghuzzle") originated in Arabia in the 7th century, evolving from the Qasida, another, much longer, Arabic form. It gained prominence in the 13th and 14th centuries thanks to the Persian poets Rumi and Hafiz. In the eighteenth-century, the ghazal was used by poets writing in Urdu, and was often sung by Iranian, Indian, and Pakistani musicians.

To truly understand the Ghazal, there are a few terms you need to know:
Sher is a rhyming couplet that can stand alone as a poem itself.
Matla’a is the first Sher.
Radif is a repeating word or phrase.
Qaafiyaa is the rhyme scheme.
Maqtaa is the final couplet.
Beher is the syllable count and length of each line.

A traditional Ghazal consists of a collection of Shers, usually seven but you can have anywhere between five and fifteen. The rhyme scheme, or Qaafiyaa is AA BA CA DA, EA, and so forth. The Matla’a sets the tone of the Ghazal, as well as the Radif and Qaafiyaa. The Radif must be included in both lines of the Matla’a. The Maqtaa may contain the poet’s name or signature, but this is left to their discretion. The Beher should be the same throughout.

I found it odd, and a little disappointing, that in the course of my research I found many well-known poets have written what they called Ghazals, but they did not follow the rules. I hope I’ve done a better job of it.


My example:

Wind whispers softly in the trees,
listen, hear the sighing trees.

Autumn changes all the leaves
a forest filled with crying trees.

A slender birch is bent to dance
a wood nymph glorifying trees.

A secret is not safe at all
when told beneath the spying trees.

I see a thousand shades of green
when I look upon the sighing trees.

A sunset paints the mountainside
liming rocks and dyeing trees.

The loggers come and cut their swath
and all around are dying trees.

Note: this Ghazal does not contain a signature in the Maqtaa. :-)

Flux In-capacitator

It's not about standing still and becoming safe. If anybody wants to keep creating they have to be about change.
— Miles Davis

Change will not come if we wait for some other person or some other time. We are the ones we’ve been waiting for. We are the change that we seek.
— Barack Obama

There is a certain relief in change, even though it be from bad to worse! As I have found in traveling in a stage coach, that it is often a comfort to shift one's position and be bruised in a new place.
— Washington Irving

Change is painful, but nothing is as painful as staying stuck somewhere you don’t belong.
— Mandy Hale

You’ve probably noticed I’ve been pretty scattered lately. I feel like I’m in flux, like I’m going through some kind of inner change. And I really hope that when I come out on the other side everything will settle into place.

I know they say that change is good, and that a change is as good as a rest, but I don’t like change. I never have. And these last few years with the pandemic and all have been nothing but change.

I get overwhelmed easily when there are too many changes and my go-to to escape (as you also may have noticed) is to crack open a book and just hide in there. Living in a world someone else has created is so much easier than dealing with reality.

Albert Einstein once said, “The measure of intelligence is the ability to change.” If that’s true then I guess my intelligence is also in flux. Some days I can handle change better than others, but throw too much change at me too quickly and back I dive into the safety of a book. Like I did this week.

At least I was reading new books instead of clinging to the comfort of old ones. Of course, that had the downside of having a harder time to put them down than I would with familiar ones. Bottom line is, I really need to find a better way of dealing with stress than reading. And don’t say crafts, because it was doing cross stitch that sent me there in the first place.

What’s brought things to a head (so to speak) is that I was looking up some information on an author who’s fairly new to me, and I was a little taken aback at what I found. This woman has published 150 books in 12 years. One hundred and fifty! Even if she started writing 10 or even 20 years before that first one was published, that’s still a lot of books.

I know you should never compare yourself to another author and I’m really not – while I enjoy reading her books, they’re not the kind of book I’d write – but I still can’t help feeling like a bit of a slacker.

I was whining about this telling a friend about this and she wisely pointed out that writers that are this prolific – Lynsay Sands, Nora Roberts, Christine Feehan, Eve Langlais, Debbie Macomber, and their ilk – have made writing their job.

Writers like my friend and I have other sources of income. We started writing because we wanted to, not because we had to. Of course, there’s a whole argument to be had on the urge to “have to write” and not having a choice, but that would be a post for another day.

But the point was made. I started writing because I wanted to, not because I have to. No one is pointing a gun to my head, I don’t need to write to keep from starving, I write by choice, not necessity. And if the writing doesn’t get done? No big deal. There’s always tomorrow. Those other writers? It’s their job and they treat it as such.

So maybe that’s what I need to do. Treat my writing like a job. At first it might be more of a part time one with flexible hours, but I need to have set hours to be in my office and stick to them. And if something interrupts me, like a medical appointment, then I’ll need to make up those hours later.

And maybe once I’ve got my schedule figured out, I can include it in my wordage report – time spent in my office and what I accomplish.

This all sounds good in theory, let’s see if I can put it into practice.

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WORDAGE REPORT

This was just one of those weeks that was filled with distractions, and Friday was such an incredibly bad day that I think I’d just rather forget all about it.

Skipped Monday’s blog post, got the rest up, even Fiction Friday although I didn’t start a new serial. I kinda got overwhelmed by life. It happens, but it still sucks when it does.

NEW WORDS:
Blog Posts – 1,760+430+949= 3,139
Poetry – 430 (included in blog post)
Other words – 0 (though not for lack of wanting to)

Total words: 3,139

Three-minute words – 0

Goals For Next Week:
Get my s**t together.

EDITING:
29 pages
Not as much as I’ve been doing in the previous weeks, but I’ll take it. The more I work on Magickal Mayhem, the more I want to get it done. If for no other reason than I can start working on something else. :-D

Goal For Next Week:
Keep up the good work on Magickal Mayhem.

MARKETING MONDAY:
Nope, once again it just didn’t happen.

Goal For Next Week:
Submit two flash stories and one poem.

TECHNO TUESDAY:
I might have to reconsider this whole techno Tuesday thing. I mean yeah, this is stuff I need to work on, but I haven’t been and what purpose does it serve to highlight my failure to do so week after week?

Goal For Next Week:
Do something technical or educational (like access one of my tutorials).

POETRY WEDNESDAY:
I enjoyed the Linking Pin Sonnet more than I thought I would, especially given my dislike of sonnets in general. I received a very nice email from the creator of it, thanking me for helping to spread the word about his form, but he never mentioned whether he liked my example or not. ;-)

Goal For Next Week:
Find a new form to share on my Wednesday blog post.

CRAFTING:
I finished that devil spawn of a cross stitch and made my needle book. My sister and several ladies in my stitchery guild tell me that cross stitch is very relaxing to work on – I beg to differ. I found it incredibly slow and frustrating, especially when I was working with metallic thread. I might even do a ranty post about it for Monday.

I’ve got a couple of big projects lined up, so I can’t let myself be distracted by the little stuff. One of them is a ball gown for my 7-year-old granddaughter to wear to the father/daughter ball at the end of the month. That’ll be my first priority. And the second is a baby quilt that just needs to be sewn together.

Goal For Next Week:
Figure out, once and for all, if my sewing machine needs to be replaced. Start work on the granddaughter’s dress.

WHAT I’M READING:
Oops! Looks like I went back to the other extreme again. Remember those last four books from the Freakin’ series, by Eve Langlais, I got? Yeah, well, I read them. All of them – Human and Freakin’, Jungle Freakin’ Bride, Freakin’ Cougar, and Freakin’ Out. Then I started on a three-in-one book called Hunger and I read The Alpha’s Mate, by Eve Langlais, Dangerous Passions, by Kate Douglas, and Bound to the Wolf, by A.C. Arthur.

Guess we know one of the reasons I didn’t get much done last week. :-D

No reading on the Paperwhite. (Gee, I wonder why?)

Goal For Next Week:
Stop buying Eve’s books. Stop ignoring the Paperwhite.

GOAL REVIEW:
I spent a lot of time last week trying to get my head into writing, but not succeeding very well. Hence the excessive amount of reading. This included a couple of out-of-town day trips, some serious family stuff, and I took myself to the movies to see Dr. Strange.

Friday I must have really pissed off the bad luck fairy because it was just one thing after another. I missed Monday’s post, but I got the others up, and on time. Didn’t start a new serial story, but I did write a new poem.

Finished that annoying little cross-stitch and got my needle book made. Did a bunch of mending for my father-in-law too, but while time consuming, I guess that doesn’t really count.

I’m really hoping that once I get things sorted out, treating my writing like a job, keeping regular hours, I’ll be able to report more successes than failures. Guess we’ll see.

Happy writing.

Wild Rose

No, this is not the new serial. I’m still having trouble with it, but I did promise to have something up for today, so this is it. This little story was written from a prompt, and it was pared down from a longer version that I believe had a romantic twist to it. This is the shorter, creepier version. :-)

Wild Rose

Lanie sat at her desk staring at the manila envelope in front of her. She promised her friend Cass she’d at least look at the contents. Never mind the fact that Cass was convinced Lanie’s fixer upper of a Victorian house was cursed, a promise was a promise.

With a sigh she dumped the contents onto her desk. It was a mixture of newspaper clippings and photo copies of newspaper clippings. Some of them had stick notes attached to them, others had highlights and notes. One of them had “Original Owner” printed across it in bright pink ink.

Despite herself, Lanie was intrigued. The original owner of this house was a widow who was accused of murdering seven people. The bodies were found buried in the garden. But the intriguing part was the side article that accused Rose Wildman of being a witch.

“She has the ability to possess a person and force them to enact all manner of evil deeds,” she read. “She should be burned at the stake, just like the witches of old.”

There were several articles of that ilk, from accusing Rose of creating potions and poisons from the herbs she grew, to singing My Wild Irish Rose as she disemboweled her victims. Another article attributed her powers to a large ruby pendent Rose wore, which mysteriously disappeared upon her death.

Lanie sat back with a snort. “What a bunch of superstitious twaddle,” she said. She loved Cass like a sister but sometimes her penchant for the supernatural was downright annoying.

The articles and envelope went into the trash can and Lanie buckled down to work. She wrote historical romance, and did well enough that she was able to buy the house outright. It was the kind of home she’d always dreamed of owning, a Victorian with a wrought iron fence around it and a large garden out back.

After working steadily for two hours, Lanie sat back in her chair and stretched. The writing was going well for a change, she gotten a lot accomplished. The virgin bride was in a coach headed for Scotland and was about to meet up with the laird disguised as a highway man. It was a good place to leave it for now - she needed a break.

Padding out to the kitchen, she made herself a cup of tea and carried it into the living room, formerly the front parlour, and sat in the wing back chair near the fireplace. This room was next on her list. She’d already pulled the panelling that went halfway up the wall off and was ready to start on the crown molding. Once it was all off she could start stripping the wall paper.

Setting her empty cup on the mantle, Lanie pulled the step ladder over to the corner of the room and picked up the wonderbar. The crown molding came off easier than she expected and she made good progress. As she repositioned the ladder next to the fireplace, it knocked against the brick and some of the mortar fell off.

“Damn it!”

Lanie ran her hand over the brick, feeling for damage. One of the bricks was definitely loose. Frowning, she gave it an experimental wiggle.

“Either I hit this harder than I thought, or this brick was already loose,” she muttered. “I think there’s something behind here.”

Carefully she worked the brick out then reached into the hole, pulling out a small leather pouch. Excitedly she opened it and a pendant dropped into her hand. It was gold filigree, set with a large red stone.

“It’s beautiful!” Lanie said breathlessly. It must have been the pendant belonging to Rose Wildman that was mentioned in the article. “No wonder she hid it.”

On impulse, she slipped the chain over her head and went over to the mirror. The stone rested just where her cleavage started. As she stared at it in the mirror it seemed to pulse with light. Raising her gaze, she stared into her eyes and gasped. It was as though someone else was staring back. Lanie did something then that she’d never done before in her life. She fainted.

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Hours later she awoke, groaning as she pushed herself up off the floor. Brushing off her clothes she glanced in the mirror again and smirked.

“You look beautiful, darling, and that pendant was just made for you.”

With a laugh she turned and went into the kitchen, picking up the cell phone to scroll through the contact list for the right number.

“Cass? You were right. There is something strange about this house.”

“I knew it!”

“Do you think...” Lanie gulped. “Do you think you could come over and help me pack? I—I really don’t want to be alone.”

“I’ll be right there,” Cass assured her.

A smile curved Lanie’s lips as she hung up the phone. Only seven bodies were found? Obviously they never thought to check the dirt floor of the basement. She flexed her fingers, a red glint in her eyes as she checked out the knives in the butcher block. Oh, she was going to have fun this evening. It had been too long!

As she waited for Lanie’s friend to arrive, she began to hum My Wild Irish Rose.

Linking Pin Sonnet

The Linking Pin Sonnet was created by Professor Joseph S. Spence, Goodwill Ambassador and creator of the Epulaeryu poetry form.

In the author’s own words: The concept is primarily based on the principles of leadership in accomplishing a mission or task in an organization. This comes by strengthening the organizational echelons at each level, by connecting each element with a linking pin of leadership for strength, thus obtaining maximum productivity in the completion of its goal. One should be able to visualize each linking pin connecting to the next to ensure strength and safety in moving every adjoining part to reach its maximum potential in mission accomplishment. Additionally, the linking pin sonnet, resonates as two lovers on the same sheet of music linking with each other, singing the same song, and moving in the same direction while strengthening each other, for betterment by overcoming obstacles and strengthening their goals with success and victory as one.

I have to admit, I not overly fond of sonnets in general, but I found this one to be both interesting and challenging. It consists of 14 lines, as all sonnets do, but the end of each line links with the beginning of the next line. Each line has eight to eleven syllables, but the rhyme scheme will depend on what kind of sonnet you’re writing: Petrarchan (or Italian) – abba, abba, cdecde; Shakespearean (or English) – abab, cdcd, efef, gg; or Spenserian – abab, bcbc, cdcd, ee.

I like the fact we’re given choices, both in the rhyme scheme and the number of syllables in the lines. I had more fun than I expected to with this form. I followed the Shakespearean style, and I even remembered to carry the link between the stanzas.


Storm Journey

I travelled beneath a lowered sky
Sky in which dark clouds begin to form
Form filled with the grey to quantify
Quantify the coming of the storm.

Storm is hesitating in the air
Air that has become heavy and chill
Chill with a promise, so have a care
Care that needs to be taken until

Until the storm has passed overhead
Overhead where the lightning flashes
Flashes as thunder fills us with dread
Dread that can burn brave souls to ashes

Ashes swept away by pounding rain
Rain that passes, but will come again.



To learn more about this amazing poet, try one of these links:
Atunis Poetry
African American Literature Book Club 

My post about the Epilaeryu  

War and Peace

With all the catastrophes that are going on, and all the hardships that are going on around the world, you don't do the world any service by walking around in pain and at war with yourself. You'd do a lot better good, a lot better service, if you find that thing within yourself that says ...move forward it's okay. It's our duty to see through it and work through it.
— Gino Vannelli

Every day there is a war inside your mind: A war between you and yourself! One side of you may defeat the other side of you! But you must know that your winning side might fail in the real world! Always be ready to give a chance immediately to your losing side, to your defeated idea!
― Mehmet Murat ildan

You have to be willing to go to war with yourself and create a whole new identity.
— David Goggins

Once upon a time, I had aspirations to be an artist. I was good at art, and more importantly, I enjoyed it. I’d even picked out the university I wanted to attend in order to pursue it.

While I also enjoyed writing – not just assignments for school, but short stories and poems on my own – I never seriously thought of it as a career. Although I vaguely recall checking out a few universities for a creative arts program (which were few and far between back then, let me tell you).

I don’t remember exactly when or why I abandoned my art, but I guess I never gave up on it completely because I have a closet full of unused art supplies. And I have folders, both in a desk drawer and on my computer, of pictures I’ve saved that I think would make a good painting. But I just never seem to find the time.

Crafts on the other hand, have always been there. Growing up I had many visits with an aunt who was an avid crafter, and I can’t tell you the number of different crafts we did. Crafts aren’t just a way to pass the time either, they have a practical use. They make great gifts, especially if you’re on a budget. Who doesn’t like receiving a hand made gift?

I never seriously thought about making a living with my crafts, and the reason for this is money. I just couldn’t bring myself to charge what a craft is actually worth. The cost of supplies is fairly low (in most cases), and it’s something to do in my spare time so I could never factor in my time properly.

Then we come to sewing. I was very young when I first learned to sew. My mother taught me to embroider when I was around 7 or 8, and I learned machine sewing on an ancient Singer sewing machine before I was 12. I liked clothes, and sewing them myself gave me a broader range of styles than I’d get off the rack. Plus it stretched my clothing budget like you wouldn’t believe.

At one time, my father thought I’d be a fashion designer because I was forever taking a piece from one pattern and making it work on another, and I wasn’t above experimenting. But design wasn’t really something I wanted to pursue.

So why am I telling you all this? Because for several months I’ve been at war with myself. All these different creative sides to me are vying for attention and if I spend too much attention on one, I start feeling guilty I’m not doing the other. And what happens is, the guilt becomes overwhelming and I end up doing nothing.

Or I end up spending my time re-reading favorite books or playing mindless games, and that just takes me to a whole new level of guilt.

Early in the week, I thought I’d hit on a solution. I could spend my mornings (when I’m at my best) on writerly pursuits, the afternoons on crafting/sewing, and the evenings for continuing something I wanted to finish, or for nothing at all.

It’s a good solution as it lets me work on both the creative and artistic sides of my nature, without any guilt. Of course, I’d no sooner settled on this when a few unforeseen problems arose. Like wanting to get my letter to my sister finished and spending the entire day on it. And both cars having to go in for repairs on separate days. And most appointments are in the morning.

But I still think I can make it work. Thursday and Friday I struggled with an idea for my new, online serial, which meant I didn’t get crafting time in. But Saturday I got a big whack of time in on crafting that spilled into the evening. Having the evenings as a “free time” is really going to help to make this work.

It’s also going to help that my crafting time will encompass all my crafts – needlework, machine sewing, crafting – so there will be no guilt if I do one and not the other.

So, the war with myself is over. I’m ready to wave the flag of truce. Let’s hope the armistice lasts.

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WORDAGE REPORT

After a strong start, I petered out pretty quickly. After doing a post for Monday and a poetry post for Wednesday, I did not get anything done for Fiction Friday. I did not do any three-minute words, but I did redeem myself yesterday by writing 1,000 words on a new idea.

It’s too bad I can’t include the words written in letters and emails last week, because that would add another 10,000 words to my total. LOL

NEW WORDS:
Blog Posts – 1,459+396+391+135=2381
Poetry – 391 (including blog post)
Other words – 1104 (new idea)

Total words: 3,485

Three-minute words – 0

Goals For Next Week:
Decide what I’m doing about the three-minute words. Find something new for Fiction Friday.

EDITING:
59 pages
I really have to find a new name for the elven steeds. Until my editor pointed it out, I didn’t realize how annoyingly repetitious the word “steed” is. She also caught a serious boo-boo. I had a scene where the characters were acting on an escape plan they made, but no one ever mentioned what this plan was so it was a little confusing. Oops!

Goal For Next Week:
Keep up the good work on Magickal Mayhem.

MARKETING MONDAY:
I actually spiffed up a story to send to a print magazine. I had to pare away about 150 words to meet the word requirements, but I think it’s a better story for all of that. Cross your fingers for me.

Goal For Next Week:
Submit two flash stories and one poem.

TECHNO TUESDAY:
Does working on my Alphasmart Neo out on the deck all day count as something technical? Well, it better. Because that’s how I spent my day. I wrote a 6,700 word letter to my sister. Too bad I couldn’t have that kind of writing day on my fiction writing.

Goal For Next Week:
Do something technical or educational (like access one of my tutorials).

POETRY WEDNESDAY:
Once again I managed to find a form I enjoyed. The resulting poem was something a little bit different for me, but I liked it as well.

Last week I had a lovely email from a gentleman whose poetry form, the Epulaeryu, I featured back in 2011. He’s created two other poetry forms, and suggested I might like to try his Linking Pin Sonnet. To be honest, I’m not a big fan of sonnets in general, but this one looks interesting. Whether or not I’m able to come up with a worthy example by Wednesday remains to be seen, but I’ll give it a try.

Goal For Next Week:
Feature a Linking Pin Sonnet on my Wednesday blog post.

CRAFTING:
This is where I started out weak, but ended strong. During the week the only thing close to crafting I did was alter a sundress so I can wear it. But yesterday afternoon I had a Buffy the Vampire Slayer marathon going on, and I spent most of that time working on the cross stitch I started during my last guild meeting. Man, is it slow going! It’s a little less than 2 ½ inches square, and I basically got the flowers in the corners done.

Goal For Next Week:
Finish the teeny cross stitch. Machine sew my embroidered tote bag together.

WHAT I’M READING:
Geez. I’ve gone from one extreme to the other, reading wise. I finished Night Shift, by multiple authors, and couldn’t help but notice, like the kid’s song says, one of these things is not like the others. The first three stories were paranormal romance, but the last one was more like swords and sorcery. Kind of strange, but I enjoyed all four stories. After that I went for something completely different and started reading Book Boyfriend by Kris Ripper.

No reading on the Paperwhite.

Goal For Next Week:
Keep up the good work with the variety of books I’m reading. Stop ignoring the Paperwhite.

GOAL REVIEW:
Got all my blog posts up, although Friday’s wasn’t much of a post. But I feel like I redeemed myself with the 1000 words I wrote on a new idea.

I did get a single story sent out, but I did not do anything technical on Tuesday.

Wrote a new poem for my post, but did not do any other poetry. Spend some time on crafts, but it was all in one swath.

So . . . was last week a success? I’d have to say not really. I started out with good intentions and then went right off the rails. *sigh* But there’s always next week.

Happy writing.

Friday Failure

Sorry folks. Fiction Friday just isn’t happening this week.

I have a story I’d like to serialize, but it’s just not co-operating. I got bogged down writing an introduction to it, and I’m at the point where I need to step back from it for a bit.

The introduction is giving me a lot of trouble. I’ve been trying to wrangle it so that it gives a sense of what the story is about, creating an atmosphere, but I’m thinking it’s detracting from instead of adding to the story.

At this point I’m not even sure it needs an introduction.

Hopefully I’ll wrangle it into submission and post the first installment next Friday. Or a flash piece. Or something fictionish. But for this week, I’m throwing in the towel.

Chanso Poetry

The Chanso is a great form for anyone who wants to write poetry but doesn’t want to be tied down to one of the traditional forms. You get to choose the number of stanzas, the rhyme scheme, and the number of syllables per line. The only requirement is that all lines have the same number of syllables, all stanzas have the same number of lines, and the rhyme scheme stays the same throughout the poem. It ends with an envoy that should be half the length of a verse.

Also called the Canso, or the Chanson, this form originated in 12th century France and was popular with the European troubadours. You can use whatever you like as the theme for your poem, but traditionally it was written as a love song. The first stanza should introduce your theme, and the envoy should wrap everything up.

My example isn’t a love song, it was inspired by something a little different.


Geese at Dawn

Noble figures, gliding in a line,
Cutting through the water, clear as glass.
Silent sentinels, by my count nine,
Guarding the access, no one shall pass.

Patrol the breakwater, duty bound,
Keeping the others safe on the shore.
Herald the dawn with focus profound
And when the moment is right, you soar.

Take wing, noble guardians of the bay!
Ascend to the heights, where you belong.
Soar, majestic gatekeepers grey
In a vee your flock is ever strong.

You were here with the very first dawn
And will be here still when man is gone.

Usually poems just sort of come to me, but this one was inspired by something I saw a few days ago. It was early morning, and I was parked (alongside several others) down at the yacht basin beside our local harbor. I was looking out over the water as I enjoyed my take-out breakfast, and I happened to notice a line of Canada geese crossing from one side of the basin to the other. They looked so stately, so precise, as they glided one after another in a straight line. It’s to my regret I didn’t take a picture of them with my phone, but obviously it left an impression on me.