Editing Analogy

When I was sitting in the library with a writing buddy, staring out the window at the river below, I started thinking about how editing was like a snake shedding its skin. How the outer skin, like superfluous words, is left behind.

But then I thought maybe a better analogy would be the life cycle of a butterfly. Your idea is like the first glimmer of an idea. Some will hatch, some won’t. One idea will make it though, just like one egg will turn into a caterpillar. The caterpillar begins to grow and expand, consuming food to gain nutrients. Your story begins to grow and expand as you add words and details.

The caterpillar finally finishes its cycle of growth. It stops and begins to shed its skin while at the same time creating a cocoon to aid in its transformation. The transformation for your story is the editing process, where your words are refined and polished. The caterpillar turns mushy as it re-forms, just as your story may get worse before it gets better.

Finally, the cocoon splits open and a beautiful butterfly emerges. You finally lay down your pen and your story or novel is done.

The novel I’m working on right now is well into the mushy stage of editing. I knew going in it was going to be a beast to edit – it’s the fifth book in a series and I thought I was being smart doing it for NaNoWriMo. I was not. NaNo was all about the quantity of words, not the quality, and I’m paying for it now.

So far I’ve scrapped the idea of starting each chapter with an excerpt from “historic records.” I rewrote the prologue three times before scrapping it altogether and starting fresh. And I’ve re-ordered the first five chapters several times.

But I’m getting closer. It may take longer than I’d hoped, but soon my story will be ready to break out of its cocoon. And I dare to say it’ll be worth the wait.

I Lost My List

Yup, that’s right. Somewhere between checking out at one grocery store and parking at the next one, I lost my grocery list. Now this might not be a big deal to some of you out there, but it’s a very big deal to me.

I kept a pad and pen stuck to the refrigerator and my husband and I both put things on the grocery list as we run out of them. Without the list it’s chaos as I try to remember what we might need. It’s also expensive because I’ll buy things, not knowing if I actually need them or not.

But it got me thinking . . . I used to have a lot of success following lists. And I daresay I was more productive when I kept daily “to-do” lists, things I wanted to accomplish during the day.

Lists help us remember things we might otherwise forget, like groceries. Memory needs structure, a connection, but a list can be utterly random. We can add or subtract from a list. Who doesn’t love the rush of crossing things off your list? They can give you satisfaction and a sense of accomplishment.

The act of creating a list can also trigger ideas for other things. Say you make a list of things you want to remember to include in a story, one of those things might get you thinking in another direction, which could lead to a whole new story.

Lists are concise and orderly. They can convey a lot of information in just a few words. They’re small and to the point, and can make a task seem not quite so formidable. And a pro and con list can be a great help in decision making.

To help break bad habits, try making a “Not-to-Do” list. Do not spend so much time playing games. Do not eat keep eating after you’re full. Do not spend so much money on things you don’t need on Amazon.

A list can save you time by laying out what you need to do so you can prioritize the parts of a task. A grocery list can save you money by letting you know exactly what you need so you’re not wandering around the store, like me, buying random items.

I get distracted easily, and I’m weak when it comes to wasting time on things like binge reading. After careful consideration, I think I’m going to try doing a daily to-do list, just jotting down things I’d like to accomplish, one day at a time.

In the meantime, as far as grocery shopping goes, I’m going to start taking a picture of my list before I shop.

Welcome Back

Well. That was another break that was longer than I expected. I swear there were several times I was going to do a blog post here, but then I’d get distracted and . . . well, you know how that goes. I have not yet earned my vanity plates. *hangs head sadly*

But this is a new year, and while it’s not a new me, it’s a more determined me. I spent the entire day yesterday cleaning my desk and reorganizing the bookcases behind my desk to make a space more conducive to spending more time in my office, hopefully writing.

I may have thought I was over the reading madness, when last I posted, but I was not. My Achilles heel seems to be boxed sets of fated mates, whether they be to aliens or shifters. And Amazon appears to be full of them. *sigh*

Yesterday I updated my Goodreads goal so I could start fresh for the new year. My original goal was to read 75 books in the year. But halfway through the year I had to upgrade that number to 100, and then 150. By the end of yesterday my total sat at 222 books for the year. So my first goal for the new year is less reading, more writing.

I also want to spend at least an hour a day in my office. Maybe there’ll be days where all I do is push papers around, but I want to build a habit of being in there.

When I started meeting with an old friend on Wednesdays, the idea was to inspire each other to write. We wrote as teenagers and she wanted to get back into it. This has not been happening. We usually reminisce and go out to lunch, then reminisce some more. Sometimes we go shopping. I told her that starting in the new year I wanted us to start getting some writing in on our Wednesdays. Only time will tell if this happens.

Meanwhile, someone from a writing group I was in a few years ago got in touch with me, looking to see if I wanted to get together at the library the next town over to work on our writing together. It’s kind of like the write-ins from NaNo. We meet and write with very little talking. The focus is on the writing. And I’ve been getting some editing done on Elemental Spirit. It’s finally going in the direction it needs to do. So that’s a step in the right direction.

Early last year I realized that my writing was being subsumed by my crafting. The stitchery guild I was part of took up a lot of my time, and honestly crafting seemed easier than writing. But I’ve slowly been turning that around and I’ve put the crafting in the back seat where it belongs. Now I just have to do the same for my reading. LOL